Positive points-
- blog layout fits my theme for my music video (fantasy/light-hearted)
- lots of audience feedback for each of my plans
- good detail on my shooting scripts (draft and final) and on other planning ideas
- My research is well thought through and planned
- basing my singer on Florence Welch's look
- some format changes
- Good number of post at this time
Need of improvement point-
- Make Alice's makeup more natural or change wording slightly to fit pictures as they are good
- mention in final shooting script when Florence starts singing
- Show some sort of proof that I have emailed the record company for permission
- have the shooting script less jumpy so it flows more
- Only one post that needs completing (lyrical analysis)
I agree with mostly all of these points but when I explained why my shooting script is jumpy the media students reconsidered their point.
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